Sunday, September 26, 2010

Words, Final Draft

Words- a privilege that is too often taken for granted. They can be a speech, sound, series of sounds, or anything that has meaning as a unit of language. No one truly understands how much power can be in a single word, making it ultimately the deadliest or the most beautiful weapon known to man. With words, we create ideas which create actions that shape who we are and what we want to be. With words, we have achieved greatness, but we have also achieved destruction, making it impossible for us to find the resolution, as to we are always knocking down what we have built up.

First of all, without words we would be nothing, have nothing, and feel nothing. They are used more often than anyone could imagine… Essentially, we use words to think and feel. For example when you have any type of physical or emotional feeling, your body communicates with your mind to find and solve the problem by asking questions like, “Why am I hurting? Where is it coming from? How do I fix it?”, and so on. This all happens in a matter of seconds, and is so instinctive that we don’t even have time to realize how much communication has just gone on. This shows that words define who we are and without them, there would be nothing because there would be no us.

Words have been used in the past as deadly, vicious weapons that have left lives in shambles because they were so strong. A particular moment in time that comes to mind is World War II. If Hitler had not been such a persuasive and powerful speaker, do you think that WWII would still have happened? He used his words to persuade thousands of other people that it was right to do what he wanted done… Something that took away and devastated millions of lives. He himself never forced anyone to believe in what he believed in, it was his ideas that created actions in other people. There are many accounts of this cruel, barbarous, abusive way words have been used to destroy in history.

There are so many accounts of evil ways words have been used in the past, but there are many beautiful things that have been done all because of words. Martin Luther King Jr. and Gandhi did not believe in violence, yet they led two of the greatest civil rights movements ever recorded in history. They used their words to persuade and convince other’s of their ways, which were to try and help society prosper and become better for everyone. They were great speakers who wanted the best for the world, and that is what makes their words beautiful, because they wanted to make the world a better, safer place.

Although these cases of good and evil differ greatly, there is one factor about them that makes them practically the same. These people used their words to convince and prompt other people of their ways. They each had an idea in mind that they were passionate about, and in turn they translated that passion into words that was meant to strike the hearts of the listeners. Their words were meant to rouse emotions in others and create certain actions, whether for good or bad, for better or for worse. Now the intentions of the words were complete opposites; as one is the “wrecking ball” of society while the other is a “building block”, they were powerful all the same.

We can use words in any way that we want. They have been used to create our society, civilization, and even the history of the world. Since the beginning of time we have been building on this “tower”, which is made up entirely of words, and is added to each and every day. But as we add more and more building blocks, making our tower taller and stronger, there becomes an even greater risk that there will be words used as “wrecking balls” which are meant to destroy all progress and to diminish the hopes and ideas of others. There is no way to avoid this inevitable decree: what goes up, must come down.

Everyone has this power in them. It is a right. It can be used as an ugly weapon, such as a dagger or a knife that can cut and wound another’s soul and be a wrecking ball to their tower. Or it can be used as a gift, beautiful like a rose. Something that when given to another person, helps to build them up and make them better and stronger, and to help to reinforce their tower. How we use our words solely depends on us, which means that we also must not be careless with our words because they can be a powerful weapon that can devastate or uplift…

Words are like fire; some people feed it and make it stronger and bigger, but they don’t fully understand that if you play with fire, you are likely to burn or get burned. This power shouldn’t be taken for granted, but in the end, it is something that can never be avoided.

Rough draft #2

Words- a privilege that is too often taken for granted. They can be a speech, sound, series of sounds, or anything that has meaning as a unit of language. No one truly understands how much power can be in a single word, making it ultimately the deadliest or the most beautiful weapon known to man. With words, we create ideas which create actions that shape who we are and what we want to be. With words, we have achieved greatness, but we have also achieved destruction, making it impossible for us to find the resolution, as to we are always knocking down what we have built up; but without words we would be nothing, have nothing, feel nothing. They are used more often than anyone could imagine, because essentially, you use words to think and feel. When you feel pain, your body notifies you by communicating with you mind, as is the same with any other physical or emotional feeling. It sets off a reaction that is so instinctive that we are oblivious to the fact that it even happens. When our body tells our mind that it is in pain, the first things we do is ask, "why am i hurting? where is it coming from?", and so on, until we can pinpoint the exact reason as to why we are in pain; and of course this all happens in a matter of seconds, not even giving us time to realize how much communication has just gone on.
This shows that words define who we are, and without them, there would be nothing.
This brings up another point, how with words we can and have reached amazing heights, but we have also used them to destroy what we have created. They have been used to create our society and civilization, and the more we build onto our foundation of simpler words, creating more advanced words and ways of communication, there becomes an even greater risk of the chance that words can be used as a type of "wrecking ball" to our "tower" that we are building more and more with each new day. There is no way to avoid the inevitable: what goes up, must come down.
This truly shows how words can be used to be beautiful of destructive. They can be used to persuade, motivate, or inspire passion within someone, whether it be for good or evil. It all depends on how we choose to use our weapons. Words can be used as daggers that can cut into an other's soul, leaving a wound that will never fully heal. Even if we are careless with words it's just like being careless with a knife, the wound will go just as deep but will be there forever, tearing down their "tower". Or we can use our words as roses. We could give someone a beautiful gift that builds them up and helps to reinforce their "tower", and make it stronger than they could have made it themselves.
This power is something everyone has. Some feed it like a fire, making it stronger and bigger, but some do not understand that if you are not careful with your fire you can be burned, or you can burn others. We cannot take this power for granted, but in the end, it is something that can never be avoided.

Friday, September 24, 2010

W

Rough draft #1

Words can be used in many different ways, for many different things. Without them, we would be nothing and there would be nothing... Words are everything we are, they make us who we are and they shape our personalities. Without words we would be nothing, have nothing. You may think that if we didn't have words we could just use sign language and such, but those are words too. Any form of communication is considered to be words. Although we have used words to build up our society, we have also used them to tear it down. Words are strong enough to be the building blocks and material for something amazing, but words can also be used as a wrecking ball too. We, human beings, are made up of words. They re who we are and what we stand for... This also means that other, strong, harsh words can tear us down and leave us in ruin, but there are other uplifting, enlightening words that can build people up. This is why we need to be extremely careful with our words and how we use them, because they can essentially be the wrecking ball that leaves someone in ruins... Or they can be the building blocks that build someone up, higher than they can be on their own. It is our choice how we want to use our words, which create actions. We could use them to help everyone around us build up to e better and stronger people, meaning that the rest of society would follow. Or we could use our words to destroy and demolish all that has been built... It's our choice...